Super creative tricks written by Year 4 A & B students

Enjoy reading these pieces of writing based on the reading of the book : The Enormous Crocodile.

I am sure you will have a lot of fun and see how we are improving our writing skills and putting our imagination in action! Congratulations!

Miss Ceci




Then the enormous crocodile was really angry because his tricks didn’t work. So he went out of the jungle, he saw a museum and he whispered to himself, ``now for clever trick number 4``. So he went inside the museum and he headed to the part of the jungle and he saw many animals.

Suddenly, he heard a noise of children so he hid himself behind some plants. He stayed standing like a statue and the children went there and one said, ``look at that croc´´! But beside him there was a lady bug that was called gab, and gab said, ´´¡ That is not a statue, it’s the enormous crocodile and he wants to eat you up``! .So they ran as fast as they could and the enormous crocodile felt very angry again.


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BY DELFINA CARRANZA


After trick n° 3,the enormous crocodile was angry but then he had a idea.The idea was to be like a water bed.So he went to the lake. He stood there and some children came. When the children got there, a gorilla appeared. His name was Toto-Titi. He lived on a bananas tree. His favorite food is the bananas. Toto-Titi said," children,children that is not a water bed, it s the enormous crocodile and wants to eat you!!!”
The children ran, and ran as fast as they could. After that,the enormous crocodile said "How mean you are". The gorilla said,"you are mean because you want to eat children". Finally, The gorilla left and the enormous crocodile said,"I am hungry again.”

By Josefina Zen



“Now for trick number 4” , thought the Enormous crocodile. The Enormous crocodile went to the park, a lot of children went there too. In the park there was a fountain without a statue. Croc stood like a statue on top of the fountain.Suddenly a group of children came. All the children went to the swings except for the smallest one , Susy. She loved to play with fountains. The Enormous crocodile was so hungry that he could eat any child. Susy told her friends that she was going to play near the fountain.The Enormous crocodile was so happy because Susy was geting closer and closer. Suddenly Tucky_Tucky flew over them and shouted, ”Stop Susy, the statue is the Enormous crocodile and he wants to eat you up!” .Tucky_Tucky hit the Enormous crocodile so he moved and Susy ran away. ”Tucky Tucky saved Susy`s day !! ”said Tucky Tucky.

By Ornella Savini



The Enourmous crocodile (after failing in the roundabout) wanted to have a new idea that could make him eat a child.On the way for trick Nº4, he saw a black and violet bush. When he went to see what was that strange thing,the bush started to change his shape and with a lighting appeared like a black and violet wolf with antennaes.
The wolf-alien walked to the Enourmous Crocodile very slowly and when he was near the enourmous crocodile,he said"hello primitive animal.Y am Finky-Pinky second,the prince of animalien land a planet a million of years light from this planet,and Y want to catch a human and take it to animalien land to make a crown with his bones as it is the tradition of my planet"."Ok", said the enourmous crocodile "but if you help me to eat a child,one for you and one for me"said the croc"ok"said finky-pinky.For this trick, the enourmous crocodile And Finky-pinky made a trap for a school bus.They are going to enter a school bus dressed like a school boy and when the bus in the first house they are going to eat children.After that passed it was time to eat the first child.But a lighting stopped them and after the lighting finished it was an alien-animal(a little older than Finky-Pinky)appeared and told the prince "you failed,you have to make a crown with bones of humans away" and he took Finky-Pinky backto animalien land.

By Alan Ludin




"Now for trick number four". The enormous croc went to a swiming pool that belonged to a family.It was a hot day. He took a waterbed croc from the pooland he pretendedto be the water bed croc. Thechildren were playing football and they got hot so they went to the pool.And they said"Who can jump to the waterbed?" but when they where about to jump a bird that live in the citi whos name was Polki came and shout them it that was the enormous crocodrile that wanted to eat them.

TRICK NUMBER FOUR by SANTI BRAVO

The Enormous Crocodile was very angry because the other tricks didn’t work. The Enormous Crocodile thought about another trick. It was very difficult because he had to bring a box and it had to be painted. Then, he went to the toyshop and he made the box with him in .It was very big so every child wanted the box with the Enormous Crocodile the children didn’t come to an agreement so they made a raffle.

The child who won, called Soledad she was very surprised .Suddenly, a female crocodile who was the wife appeared. The Enormous Crocodile was very surprise and she told the Enormous Crocodile ``what are you doing´´? The croc said who tell you and she said your friends: Muggle-Wump, Roly-Poly, Humpy - Rumpy and Trunky they can’t tell you!

So the female croc pulled the ear and the two went to the house .Croc said that he didn‘t give up if you want to know trick n 5 [you have to read it)
by Maria GS

Trick number 4

Croc was very, very angry because trick number 3 didn´t work. In this trick, croc took a toy of an animal of the baby shop and he put himself in the place of the toy animal.
Then three babies came with their grandmother. One of the babies said ``look grandma I want that toy´´ and the enormous croc whispered ``yes, a baby is coming´´. Then grandma said ``ok, but all of you go to fetch it´´
When the babies were there, a camel called Catik appeared and said `` no, stop babies it not a toy´´. ``Is, the enormous croc and he wants to eat you´´.
The babies said `` thank you´´ to the camel. Then croc said `` oh, all the animals discover me ´´.
And then the babies and their grandma went out of the toy shop.
All the babies were happy all the years.

By Bianca L. Ricci

“Now clever trick number 4(the crocodile whispered to himself).The enormous
Crocodile looked like a jumping board he get straight and holding the steps in
the swimming pool in a place to swim.

One girl went with her mother to the swimming pool.She asked if she can go
to that jumping board and the mother said yes(she agreed).

The girl went to the first step and came Fred the cheetah.The cheetah said wait
it is not a jumping board is the enormous crocodile and wants to eat you up.
So the enormous crocodile looked to Fred the cheetah and he go into the jungle.
By Franco Jalife

The Enormous crocodile had another trick.The trick was being a mechanical animal . But there was a pig called spider pig and he wanted to stop the enormous crocodile.
The enormous crocodile told him the trick that he wanted to do.He went to the "Parque de la Costa" and he put himself like a mechanical crocodile. One little child named Fernando was going to insert a coin on the crocodile. Suddenly, spider pig pushed him and he said "that is not a mechanical croc, it is a croc". The child run away. By Francisco Sola

Trick N 4.
Then the enormous crocodile was very, very hungry, and said, “NOW FOR CLEVER TRIcK NUMBER FOUR”!!!.HE SAID TO HIMSELF.
So he went to a fun park. And when it is no many people he run to the toyshop because he thought that was a BIG, BIG croc .
A little girl whose name was Sharon came and said “oh, look mom I want that BIG,BIG croc!”
“oh yes , I got it”, said the enormous crocodile. When the girl was taking the enormous crocodile a BIG , BIG lion appeared and shouted “ get out Sharon , get out.”
“ That thing is not a toy , it’s the enormous crocodile!” the BIG , BIG lion said.
Then the enormous crocodile said , “I’ am very angry, any of my tricks work!”. So he went away very , very sad and angry.
By Francesca Fadigati


One day,the Enormous crocodile went to a museum.He said,"Now for trick number 4 "."I will be a statue in the museum".His plan was that he took the statue and he put himselfe there.
Then he went to the place where the other crocodile was and he was there. When the children came, they saw the Enormous crocodile and shouted,"Look that crocodile".
Then a boy colled Tomy went to see the enormous crocodile but Carlos,the rhino that has two horns and 2 claws in each foot came and shouted,"Tomy,no its the Enormous crocodile and he wants to eat you up! Then the Enormous crocodile was very angry because his plan didnt work
by Bautista Di Paola

Now for trick number four. He pretends that he was a statue of a crocodile. First he put her arms up, then he put her legs down and there was the statue.
Then, one of the children called Frank came to the statue of the crocodile. Frank touches the statue of the crocodile. And then, when Frank touches the statue Humpy-Rumpy running and said that it was the enormous crocodile.
And all the children ran away. And the enormous crocodile got very angry.
Tini Sanchez Guerrini

The Enormous croc toy croc was verry angry because the other tricks didn’t work. Now he wanted to look like a toy croc. This trick took place in the toy shop. There were two p , 3girls, 3boys and one baby. Suddenly, one girl said, ‘ I WANT THIS TOY! Another boy said, I want this toy. Another said, I want this toy and Juan said ,I want the toy croc. SAID CROC yummy yummy yummy whispere at himself yum yum yum, delicious sais croc at him self delicious. The rour twor lion shouted not buy this, its not a toy croc, is athe enourmous crocodile and want to eat you up. The enormous crocodile cursed the lion. The lion went away, the children too.

by Luchi Picos